One Shot of the Week: 4/30/12

May 06, 2012

Secret Lives by Mizzdee

Rating: M
Genre: Romance
Characters: Edward & Bella

Summary: Bella Swan meets a handsome stranger in a club. After one dance and an undeniable connection, their night is cut short. Soon after, Bella is introduced to her newest co-worker. Can she work with the new accountant and remain professional at the same time

Bbwraven's Rec of the Week: 4/30/12

May 03, 2012

A Little Magic by GeekChic12
Review by Bbwraven

Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Humor
Characters: Edward & Bella

Summary: After four long years, Bella finally gets what she's been missing, but it's not enough. She needs more. Will she find it in the most unlikely of places? They say when you're not looking, that's when love finds you. AH, Rated M for l & l. ExB

A Little Magic is simply one of my favorite WIP’s because is not your typical Twilight fic. Most of the storyline is based on GeekChic12 meeting her husband. It’s like a sneak peek into something real – online dating. A Little Magic takes place in 2002. The days before Match.com but when chat rooms were still the hotspot for online dating. Or in the case of gamers, Edward and Bella, their spot happens to the Magic Gathering chat rooms. After a few games they start chatting offline and that’s where things progress.

I love how they both have a sense of giddiness after each phone call and the anticipation of a real face to face and as a reader it brought back all those feelings I had when I use chat with a special someone.

SwanSong78: Cool so how was your day? 

GreenEyedMonster: It was alright. Work was tough, but that's nothing new. 

He told me a couple days ago that he works in a distribution warehouse, and he absolutely hates it. Like me, he didn't finish college and is sorely regretting it. 

SwanSong78: Yeah, I hear ya. I had kind of a stressful day at work too, but I'm feeling better now. :) 

GreenEyedMonster: Oh is that so? And why, may I ask, is that? ;) 

Oy, the winky faces already. Bad news for my underwear. 

SwanSong78: Well, apart from getting to talk to one of my favorite people in the world… 

GreenEyedMonster: You better mean me :P 

SwanSong78: Actually no, I mean my cousin. 

Even though this is GeekChic12’s first WIP, she likes to breaks the rules but not in that crazy over the top way, just things that'll make you blush and makes her characters more human and relatable. I love the mix of Fluff and Lemons; it’s not so insane that it becomes unbelievable. Either way, A Little Magic should be added to your alerts, it’s a great read!

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Domysticated's Review of the Week: 4/30/12

May 02, 2012

Fairytale by CandyTwi
Review by Domysticated

Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Angst
Characters: Edward & Bella

Summary: Edward's life is way off track and even the privileged Rosalie Hale can't put him together. But it's when artist Bella Swan appears that the magic and challenges really happen...

Then he did. He slid his hands around me, shuffled us up the bed and lay down with me in his arms. It felt so lovely, he felt so lovely. I had to remember to breathe. We lay for a long time, my head cradled on his shoulder, my chest against his. The energy between us was like nothing I'd ever felt. I knew if either of us moved we would cross a line there'd be no going back from. 

When it came to it I was too chicken to move. I calmed myself by listening to his breathing, his heartbeat, by the feel of his soft t-shirt smooth over his firm body. 

After a while his breath deepened and he slept. I felt so damn grateful to just be there. I didn't move a hair.

 "Edward Cullen," I whispered. 

He didn't stir. 

I'm here again in a place called Edward Cullen, the sweetest place on earth. 

I guess it should be no surprise for readers of this blog that review count is not always a good indicator of quality. We all know the fandom is full of undiscovered authors, of wonderful stories that fly under the radar, and that’s what we’re here for, to find them and spread the love.

Even so, when a friend recommended I read Fairytale a few months ago, I was a bit dubious: a complete ExB story with less than 150 reviews? Surely if it was as good as she claimed it was, loads more people would have read it?

Boy, was I wrong: this story is quality, through and through. It follows a rather linear story arc, that of a fairy tale, as the name suggests: there is a low-born prince, pure of heart but unsure of his worth, there are evil witches (one of the most chillingly horrible Rosalies I’ve ever read), ice queens and dragons to slay. There is a princess, locked in a castle, guarded fiercely by a looming father figure. There is danger and a dark knight, and finally, of course there’s a sun-lit and unlikely happy-ever-after.

 However, what makes it unique, challenging and riveting is the setting and the way the characters are drawn and developed. These characters are desolate, desperate, and they find themselves in seedy, dark situations and do stupid, degrading things.

Set in a decidedly unglamorous L.A., we find Edward as a drifting, failing medical student, barely managing to scrape by, living in a dirty bedsit, until the most gorgeous girl on campus, Rosalie Hale, takes an interest in him; however, her intentions are far from honourable and soon Edward finds himself implicated in a glittery world of opulence and immorality. As he let Rosalie and her entourage use and abuse him, whatever little self-respect he had to start with slips away and he genuinely hits rock bottom.

Potential salvation comes in the way of an accidental encounter with artist Bella Swan-- fierce and brilliant, yet somehow imprisoned by an overwhelming father figure and an egomaniac, possessive boyfriend. Bella sees Edward for what he is, good, and lost, and a kindred spirit: her freedom.

Yet, before they can be together, they will have to battle seemingly insurmountable odds: drink, drugs, dirty money obtained in immoral ways, cheap sex with the wrong people in the wrong places for the wrong reasons, a travelling art show that threatens to swallow its participants, a black wedding.

This story is fast-paced, gritty, full of unexpected twists and turns, its characters flawed adults who screw up again and again. By the time our heroes finally find each other and a shiny, shared future they’ll have had to leave their whole lives behind and literally cross an ocean.

Fairytale is really well-written, with superb dialogue throughout and a fresh, exciting take on familiar characters. It is an Edward/Bella story that meanders through lots of non-canon pairings and isn’t afraid to show the least likeable side of our beloved characters; I’m guessing this is why it isn’t as popular as it should by rights be. But trust me on this one, you won’t regret reading it.

He stared at me, probably wondering what the fuck I was doing sitting two inches away from his mesmerising face. 

"You're not sure what to make of me, are you?" I said. 

I thought I must have imagined his next remark. 

"You seem like a creature from another world," he said. 

I could have said the same thing about him. 

"What world?" I asked 

"A world of dream or faerie," he answered. 

I felt as if I was looking straight through his eyes and into his heart. Everything stopped. I didn't have a thought for James or dad or Victoria or anyone. All I knew was I had to be close to him. 

Attractive as he was, I'm not even sure it was sexual. I slid my arms around him and put my head on his chest, feeling his long body against me. He was surprisingly muscular. I could imagine how he would look naked. 

I sighed and relaxed into him. I felt him lay his cheek against my hair. His limbs loosened deliciously under me. 

Edward. 

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TheUnderStudy's Rec of the Week: 4/30/12

May 01, 2012

The Wednesday Dinner Thing by gjficfan
Review by TheUnderStudy

Rating: M
Genre: Friendship/Drama
Characters: Edward & Alice

Summary: Four couples, unwitting neighbors, try something new: making friends. There will be laughter, there will be tears. What there won't be is canon couples! AU, AH, OOC, non-canon pairings, multiple POV. A/Ed, B/Em, R/C, Es/J. Rated M for language and lemons.

Most know that I am a lover of non-canon pairings. I will read just about any combination out there. Up until this fic, I had not seen any multi-chapter Alice/Edward fics. So, when this one popped into view, I could not pass it up. How often do we get to read an entire story that has no canon-couples? Almost never.

Alice and Edward are the main focus of this fic. They are high school sweethearts that have been married for five years now and are starting over in Seattle in upscale neighborhood, Twilight at Forest Crossing. Alice, in true characterization, has a bit of a shopping problem that her husband, Edward, discovers. The first chapter gives us a look into the world of “Eds” and “Taz,” affectionate nicknames that they have given to each other. We learn that Alice’s obsession with shopping goes deeper than one would expect. Her brief reflection on her past clearly shows how she lacked a great deal while living with her grandparents. It is mentioned that there is no memory of her parents. However, she does remember the slew of shrinks that tried to break through her sadness as a young child.

What we do garner the most from this first chapter is that Edward is definitely her savior. From whatever past the reader is eager to learn about, you grasp that Edward was a major part of the reason she is where she is today. Alice cares deeply for him and it is very much so evident in the way she speaks of him.

Edward has a real knack for understanding people, almost as if he can read their minds. He could have easily been one of the psychologists I so despised. He was a physically beautiful man, tall and lean, a born model, but he'd kill himself before he'd ever go down that career path. His true passion is music: singing, writing, playing, composing. I've lost track of how many instruments he can play. Again, the multiple Edwards, all forming my very singular Eds. 

When Edward devises a plan to help Alice reduce the amount of items she has bought unnecessarily, she reluctantly agrees. They plan to stage a very lavish yard scale for their seemingly snooty community. It is this very yard sale that the Wednesday Dinner crew meets and is formed. What is great about this story is that we get a viewpoint from each other characters. Alice and Edward are the backbone of the story, but even they are but a fragment of the true nature of this story. Friendship.

We meet young couple Emmett McCarty, who is currently suffering from a heavy loss and his supportive antique book dealer girlfriend, Bella Swan. Their story is one of healing, trust, and finding love all over again. I love how she has written Emmett in this, vulnerable and sweet, yet unyielding and determined.

I settled in to watch the game but unsurprisingly there was a rain delay. I aimlessly flipped through the channels, annoyed. I decided to go get some chips and a beer. When I stood, I noticed Alice's gift bag on the table next to the doorway. I'd already taken out the hair stuff, but I forgot those books were still in there. I wondered if she'd read them already. Instead of walking to the kitchen, I grabbed the books. 

Both book covers had clouds in the background. I guess it would be inappropriate to have pictures of big sunny skylines on books about dealing with grief. Curiosity got the best of me and I opened the first one to the table of contents. Looked like a bunch of lame-ass personal sob stories. Sorry Tiny, I wouldn't be reading that one. I figured the other would be the same, but it was a little different. It did have some stories, but it also had exercises to "help me cope". Had to roll my eyes on that one. 

This feelings shit was exactly why I didn't want to go talk to one of those psychs in the first place. I feel fucked up that my brother died, and especially about the way he died. Was he too drunk to feel anything? Did he know he was drowning? I cringed just thinking about it. Just as I was about to toss that book aside too, I noticed something about using a journal to write down your feelings. That really did make me fling it to the side. Why in the hell would anyone want to take everything they were upset about, write all of it down, and keep it forever? It made absolutely no sense to me. 

Things for Emmett get worse before they get better, but it’s nice to see his character with a lot more depth than being big jock and jokster. I have never seen Emmett written with so much heartbreak and hope. It’s compelling to see. Also we have always seen Bella as the quiet and shy girl, but with Emmett falling apart, she stays strong and pushes him when she has to. I love her determination in this story.

Connected to Bella is her partner in dealing, Carlisle Cullen. Carlisle, I admit, is a bit of a egotistical snob. I love it! It of course tappers off, especially as we get to know him. His POV provides so much insight later in the story and I almost feel bad for hating him as much as I did. He is married to the blonde bombshell Rosalie Cullen. Her introduction into the group is harsh at first, but it is a part of what makes this story so funny. The beginning is filled with jealousy and misunderstandings. It is those very things that eventually bring them closer.

The last couple is that of Esme and Jasper. Their relationship is the newest of all our couples, but no less wonderful. Esme has had her tragic past, but the TV design star has found new life with Jasper. He is the country boy we all love with the power to tell Esme what she’s missing and be able to be the sweetest man on the planet. He is also an intellectual hottie that can make statistics sound sexy. Once their relationship begins to flourish, the passionate nature of the two of them explodes even more than it had before. I am enamored with the way Esme always speaks of him.

With Jasper's sexual history, he absolutely could not be jealous about Marcus. Yet, he clearly was. He couldn't or wouldn't admit it though, and he'd been the same way when I first told him. I loved moments like these, when he showed his real emotions, and human nature overrode all his carefully developed psychology training and resolve. I'd certainly been jealous of his past, and it made me a little happy that he was even the tiniest bit jealous of mine. 

Once our Wednesday crew’s stories begin to intertwine and Alice begins to poke her nose all around, we get a group of strangers who swiftly become friends. They cry, laugh, live, and learn together. There is lots of drama in the story, but nothing too tragic that the humor is out of place. It all ties the story together, creating this new family that has bonded over a yard sale, a love for books, grief, triumph, and the need help the one you love.

Gjficfan is an excellent writer that incorporates all those funny moments with friends that we retell over and over and the realistic struggles of acceptance. Over a tradition of a Wednesday dinner, these people grow tremendously. She makes you feel like you are one of the group and reminds you of those similar moments you have shared with your family and friends.

It wouldn’t be right if I didn’t mention the lemons. Yes, there are a few in this story, but not so many that it overpowers the meaning behind it. We get a little loving from each other couples. Even one between our main couple happens in the first chapter. My dear gjficfan does not disappoint, but each one is done differently each time.

Do not sleep on this fic. It is worth the read. As I stated in my final review of the story, “I am so glad that I was able to fall so in love with your characters: The Edgy Carlisle, the Healing Esme, the Emo Whisperer Jasper, The Bombshell Roadie Rose, The Love Bucket Emmett, Alice "The Glue" Masen, Way to your Heart Swan, & The Magician Edward.” Read and discover exactly what I have.

Amber1983's Rec of the Week: 4/30/12

April 30, 2012

Feisty in Four Inch Heels by MarLea Pie
Review by Amber1983

Rating: M
Genre: Angst/Romance
Characters: Edward & Bella

Summary: I organize Events for a living; Weddings are a different kind of hell. Try planning a wedding when the brother of the bride is an infuriating, arrogant, breathtaking man, constantly at odds with your opinion…evil in Armani. God help me, I wanted more…

Less than two chapters in, I knew I simply had to choose Feisty in Four Inch Heels as my debut review for Indie Fic Pimp. MarLea Pie’s well-written tale of fun, fashion and the filthiest-talking Edward you’ll ever encounter has captured my heart, and lead to me consuming all 14 posted chapters in mere days.

Sassy and sexy, event planner Bella gets more than she bargains for when she stumbles upon the stunning Edward playing piano alone in the dark at one of her regular venues. After a rocky first meeting the pair experience one of the hottest slow dances I’ve ever read:

The piece ended but we remained wrapped in each other. His fingers at my back had splayed his pinky almost, but not quite teasing, a smidge too low, for a bit too friendly contact. Don't get me wrong – I wasn't complaining, especially since I was close to outright fondling the hair at the nape of his neck. 

Our breaths mingled. I could almost feel the air around us steaming; it was intense with him so close. 

I felt possessed by him. 

His beauty, his harshness. 

His voice, his fingers. 

His movement, his laughter. 

His scent, the scent of his breath, the breath that came from his lips, the lips I wanted to taste. 

And Taste. 

 And Taste. 

And TASTE. 

I willed myself to concentrate. The look in his eyes reflected mine. 

 Lust and Want. 

My gaze fell to his mouth and my lips parted, the tip of my tongue barely escaping. I couldn't look directly at him, I would pounce for sure. 

Things get complicated when Bella discovers that Edward is in fact the brother of her biggest client, and apparently off limits. The push and pull of their UST is truly captivating; in every scene you know that they are only moments away from giving in to their desires, and their verbal sparring is merely foreplay.

MarLea’s writing style flows beautifully, making FiFIH truly a pleasure to read, whilst her vivid imagery has you feeling every single moment alongside her characters:

It was like I had never been kissed; kissing before this was nothing, menial, not even a blip on the radar of what he was giving me now. They shouldn't even have been considered kisses. What he was doing to me now, this was better than any caress I had ever read, watched or dreamed of. He was achingly delicious. My fingers threaded through his soft sexy hair and I angled my head slightly, thrusting my tongue deeper into his warm mouth, hungry for him, hungry for more. More, please let me have more… 

I love that this story is set in Canada, and the best part about this is that Edward speaks French - and boy does he speak it! Dirty talking Edward is my kryptonite and juicy morsels like this had me truly tingling:

"I want to fuck your mouth. I want to watch your beautiful lips wrap around my cock. And when I cum - because you're going to make me cum Isabella - I want you to swallow." 

MarLea clearly knows her stilettos from her Mary Janes and it's so refreshing to find a Bella who loves fashion and looking great and doesn't only want to slop around in her Converse. I adore the way MarLea artfully runs this theme throughout, and uses it to complement the plot rather than detract from it:

"His nearness made every inch of me fill with warmth; the things his voice could do to my body alone had me trembling in my BCBG Booties."
 
There is another scene that may just be the sexiest moment I've ever witnessed in a shoe store.

It's very easy to fall in love with these two. Edward is sexy and kind with just the right amount of arrogance, whilst Bella is strong, funny and not afraid of going after what she wants. Interesting turns of phrase like "my heart liquefied in my chest" and "Did she break me, even before she could fix me?" make this story really stand out.

Their interactions will certainly have your heart racing, both from the emotion and the incredible sex scenes; some of the best citrus I've seen in a long while:

Then his mouth enveloped my right peak, nipping it between his teeth as his fingers pinched and lengthened the other and it was there, the spark, except it wasn't a spark anymore, it was a flame, it was a fire, and it was growing, overtaking me, spreading through my body from deep deep deep inside my belly, to my legs, to my chest, to the tips of my fingers, and the tips of my toes, and I rode him, overtook him and I felt him watch me let go… 

"Yes, baby, cum for me, I want it, I want you…" he growled, then his teeth scraped at the sensitive skin of my neck right below the lobe of my ear and grazed down until he hit the spot where my neck met my shoulder and he bit, and I couldn't feel pain, only outstanding pleasure, and it was enough to break skin, enough to show me he owned me, and I was there, over the peak, soaring, exploding, like never before. 

The supporting characters in FiFIH definitely shouldn't be overlooked either, from Rosalie and Emmett's hilarious meddling to Seth as Bella's adorable brother, and not forgetting the creepy Royce, they are all fantastically drawn.

MarLea Pie has exceptional writing ability and a great storyline. The heartfail of the prologue has left me anxious for the future of her characters but I have every faith in her abilities to reach a brilliant conclusion. From the lush lemons to the language to the Louboutins, this is a roller coaster ride you won't want to miss.

One Shot of the Week: 4/24/12


Wherever You Go by Messy Bar & theswandive

Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Drama
Characters: Edward & Bella

Summary: Collaboration with theswandive. Our donation to Fandom Fights Mental Illness. Summary: The old adage is true...you don't know what you've got until it's gone. Rated M for language.

New Fic of the Week: 4/24/12

April 27, 2012

Hold Me Down by peristew
Review by Lemon Charlotte

Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Angst
Characters: Edward & Bella

Summary: Not me. That's who this girl is. She is not me. And for the first time, Edward wants someone who is not me. The tequila sits at the bottom of my stomach and begins to grow tentacles. I am tequila brave. 

I'm not ready to sit down and play nice, so I make a b-line to the bathroom. 

Standing in front of a sink, staring at my reflection in the dull mirror, I touch my lips, remembering the feel of his—the lips I know so well. It had been too long since I last kissed Edward, since before he last kissed me. 

This is familiar territory, this…game… I guess you could call it a game. We play it often, and I always win. Tonight he is putting up a fight. He wants me to believe it's over. 

It can't be over. 

A thickness builds in my throat, and I swallow it down. No tears, please. The thickness builds again, and I spit into the sink and lock my jaw to keep my tears from escaping. 

Pull it together,Bella.

What if Bella is the bad guy?

Hold Me Down opens with Bella rushing to meet her friends for their weekly Thursday night meet-up. Three guys and her, friends since first grade, only this week Edward is bringing along a date. She’s nervous, and edgy and immediately there’s tension in the air. This night is not going to end well because this is no tale of unrequited love, or unresolved attraction. Edward and Bella were already lovers, until some time in the recent past, when, it seems, Edward could bear Bella’s messed up games no longer and cut her loose. This particular night in the bar, it’s hard to see why Edward would want to be with her at all. She’s selfish and at times cruel, treating both Edward and his new girl with scant respect. Clearly, she doesn’t care for herself much either. Yet she’s in agony, albeit of her own making, and it’s impossible not to feel her pain. As for Edward, he’s determined to make things work with his new girl. But Bella just won’t leave him be. Peristew had me gripped from the start.

The story of Bella and Edward’s long friendship unfolds, with revealing glimpses from their first meeting at age seven and throughout their school years. It becomes clear that for Edward at least, she has always been more than a friend:

By the time we were freshmen in high school, Edward and I had explored a little more than each other's mouths. 

"Are you my girlfriend?" he asked. 

We were lying on his bed and had just finished rounding second base. His hand was up my shirt, his palm flat and warm against my stomach. The spot just beneath my earlobe was still tingling from the way he had suckled on it—pulling at the delicate skin with his lips, bringing the rosy blood up, just to the surface. 

"Oh, um… we're friends." I shrugged and sat up, scooting to the edge of his bed. 

"So, you do this with Jasper and Jake?" The expression on his face was disbelieving, with his brows furrowed and his mouth slightly agape, as he joined me at the edge 

"Ew, no. Edward… it's fun, isn't it?" I hopped to my feet and stood in front of him, wrapping my arms around his warm neck. 

His evergreen eyes narrowed and did a full left-to-right sweep. 

"Okay …you're not my girlfriend, but you're not just my friend?" 

That was a subject that came up more and more. What was this? What were we? 

I didn't want to know....Leaning in, I sucked on his bottom lip, before slipping my tongue inside his mouth. Kissing was easier than talking. It was easier than telling him things he didn't want to hear.

 Bella has never been able to give more. Edward has been so sweet, so kind, so decent, it seems, patiently fulfilling the role of fuck buddy for too long. Don’t get me wrong, this Bella is strong, feisty, loyal and game. But she has hurt and used our boy. It’s not his story, but Peristew lingers over his clear anguish.

He shook his head as he moved toward me, his steps slow and prowl-like. He reached out, his fingers hooking into the belt loops of my jeans, and he pulled me to him. He had gotten so tall, just in the past few months. He towered over me, forcing me to stare up at him. He pressed a soft kiss to my lips once, twice, then one more time before capturing my lips in this near-desperate way. 

I backed off a little, but he held me tighter, his forehead pressing against mine. "Don't pull away from me." He was nearly begging. Kissing me again, he urged me to keep going. "No one's here," he murmured, curling his fingers around my neck, pulling me closer. "Don't pull away…" He pressed his body into me until there was no space between us. Placing his hands at my sides, he gripped me tightly, like he was holding me in place, like if he let go, I would run away. He may have been on to something.

Between these glimpses of the past and the present Bella has had a change of heart. We don’t know why. What we do know is that Bella is desperate, and will stop at nothing to get Edward back, flirting recklessly in front of him and all of their friends in a sad and frightening bid for his attention. I am not sure yet, why she wants this. I am not even sure that I want this for Edward. Bella is damaged, their relationship dysfunctional. We don’t know how much pain Edward’s endured at this stage. Is Bella likely to change for the better? I don’t know. And this is what makes this story intriguing at just five chapters in. I love angst. I think this story will have it in spades and on both sides. Fasten your seatbelts, we could be in for a bumpy ride.

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